All Comments on 'Sparkle Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Oh Christ, yes! Mega-hot, dirty, and depraved, just the way I like it, now I need more! I wish I could give you 10 stars, but you'll have to make do with 5, sorry...

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Great writing! I can't wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Good job

I really love ur writing if u can make more like this, I will make sure I practically memorize them

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
continue

I really want to see what happens next with them. Please continue the story. Can we get a little teaser of you're still in the process of writing?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Awesome

I liked the way they grew more towards each other. I loved the way the daughter handled the situation with his phone. Very mature. I'd like for more of them. Don't include another person. It would lessen their connection. But please I gotta have some.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Can there be more?

This is one of the best written stories I've seen. Please continue. Their love needs to grow even more as they explore each other and I'd love to read how that happens.

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