All Comments on 'Sparring Ch. 03'

so does she want him or not? so far all I can tell is he is an asshole that has to pick on someone smaller.

It appears she lusts for him and dislikes him also. It appears Venge has an alpha personality but I'm a bit confused as to what is really going on between them.

I will give some a small insight on these two. They have a very Twisted relationship. Mind you they are not together by any means. They are just two sick twisted vampires. If anyone want to know about about these two or want me to write another story to give more insight two these two let me know.

this story seems like it could be really good its kind of interesting so far but there needs to be longer chapters and more background on the characters

There is a huge background for the characters mentioned in my story. But not sure anyone wants to see a more in depth story with these two. Also I am not sure how long the chapters can be when you post them. If those that read my stories please throw some Feedback my way. If you want something deeper let me know. Cause in in all truth. Satavia was created by my Girlfriend, I asked her if I can use her in my story. Since I know how she. So please throw some Feedback my way.

Yes please continue. I would like to see where this leads. The suspense is killing me. I like the fact that she is not a petite pushover and she can hold her own. Bring on the erotic scenes. :) Btw.. Just how big is Venge down there ? Otherwise you are doing great ;)

Satavia is rather tall herself. Venge is around 6'4 Satavia is around 6'2.

Sadly my ex and I broke up in 2012 so I didn't feel like writing anymore.

So, it's been a rough to get my head straight again. So give me a bit and I will aim to post the next part of SPARRING.