All Comments on 'Spatial Disorientation Pt. 02'

or should I say my impression of the opening chapter didn't lead me to anticipate where we went.

...and this is rapidly becoming a text-only Meet N Fuck game. Which isn't necessarily a bad thing.

A little advice? Slow down. Fix those little grammar buggies and find some more evocative language besides "hot but not as hot as the hot lady", you know?

Still stoked for more.

I think it could benefit from more story to wrap the sex in.

Definitely fix the language issues.

The rest? Let's see how it goes.