All Comments on 'Spatial Disorientation Pt. 03'

by ThenaughtyDomi

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Good story but very short chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Improvement

The language hasn't improved since chapter 1 word 1.

Maybe read it to yourself before posting, or....hey....PROOFREADERS?

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