by Wilfu1
I found myself able to "see" through the impaired eyes of this character. Your attention to detail, judicious use of humour, and wordcraft made this a joy to read. Well done!
A well polished story.
Most of the stories are more about the act and less about the build up. Yours was a proper balanced story
Humour appreciated!
Sometimes you find a little gem of a story and this is one - Diamond stuff!
I really liked this story. Short, sharp dialogue, smoking hot. Very fine erotic writing. Thank you.
Bob
A new story line! I loved it - the "handicap" - i don't think I'm supposed to use that word except in the context of making bets on a round of gold
5 starts - hard to imagine what story would earn 5 if this one doesn't
GAWD!
What a HOT story...the picture you painted...what a hot aromatic coupling...nothing held back, hearing/smell/sound/feeling accentuated...Anna is amazing...
and lucky Will...fantastic cure for jet lag...
Another for my all-time greats folder...slam-dunk 5/Fave/Bookmark/Follow Author