by rarmons
Pages 1 and 2 were so boring I sped read it just to get to the point and that was rushed. Fail! *
Really liked the premise. Thought it was creative and well executed. Ignore the naysayers; write the way you want and you will find an audience that likes it.
Great story! Mom didn't seem to mind much since she passed out from her climax. Julian didn't have any problem performing for the crowd either. I wonder if Dr. Sorensen has a son?
Really enjoyed the story. It was good paced. Entertaining! !
This was an excellent story,well written and very erotic!
I was actually laughing at the end..."nodding vigorously" - oh my!
One of you BEST pieces. Truly amazing. Loved the ending. Worth more than JUST 5 stars.
Research requires volunteers sign agreements before the process begins,
Asking two volunteers who DON'T know each other, basically ORDERING them to have sex without consent is flat out nonsense.
Nope. you need a better approach than this. That cost you four stars.
Even five years later.
My first comment has not actually been cleared while I'm typing this, so I can't verify, but I might have mixed up the names of the protagonists, if so please accept my apologies. I was referring to "Dr. Sorensen" , of course.