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Click here"I don't want to proceed with the divorce. It was just hurt on my part to try to strike out to hurt you the way I thought you had hurt me. I now know that I was wrong. I'm sorry. I am also sorry that I didn't confront you when I first found out. Jennifer has reminded me that I am as much to blame as you are."
Molly simply reached out to take Jim's hand in hers and say, "I love you."
"I love you and I always have." Jim smiled at Molly and then looked to Jennifer.
"We owe you so much. Thanks for being there to save me from making a huge mistake." Jim rose and took his daughter in his arms and kissed her forehead.
"Let's go home, OK?"
The three left together to continue their life just as they had before her special day, her 18th birthday.
- COMMENTS
Rayjag19802 months agoToo abrupt of an ending. He said Ron violated agreement by contacting wife. Should have included retribution. Have his PI deliver a package to his wife with all the evidence while he was still in Cleveland?
Nallus7 months ago5 became 4 because of this last short part.
Jim should not let his daughter get away blaming him for keeping it quiet. He should have made it clear to both women that getting custody of the daughter was first and foremost before he could even consider divorce. After that he would accept some blame, but he was always weighing the trade-offs of divorce versus biting the bullet.
Also, Molly, working in a hospital store room let some man start fucking her without realizing it was not her husband? She should be read the riot act for that one! Absofuckinglutely!
bigurn8 months agoAfter a second reading, I have to rerate this saga as a 3 star rating. This is due to your making the Dad out to be " as much to blame as you are" ... What kind of liberal, bullshit reasoning is that? No one, not under the influence, is in some kind of trance and lets some guy get them undressed enough to initiate sex. Much less, let them finish. Not even if it is only 6 or 7 strokes. Mom is the one who had so much casual sex that it was just no big thing for someone to walk into a storage room and start rearranging her clothes and screw her... Although she appears to be faithful after that, she was a cheap slut, back then. Only Mom did anything to apologize for.
Cookiecreamy8 months agoIt's a great story. I loved the moral behind it. The passion between every character. The only negative that i have is the character development. Too much depth. The main stoey gets lost in the mud while describing in infinite detal. Less of that and stick to the real. Rhe back and forth of each character narrating the view also got repetitive. The reader knows what happened by the previous section, so repeating details drags it on. The ending was abrupt but ut was good. When you close ouy a story, ease it to the finish. Make the reader enjoy and savor it.
I saw some great value in the writing. Keep up the good work. The final chapter gets 5 cookies! 😍
