by Yanglee30
This story would have to improve to be horrible. Your planning of the story is so ragged and repetitive and your use of words is just so jumbled it's pathetic. Take a literacy course and try again.
Very repetitive. I liked the idea but the way it was told i got bored and lost concentration.
LOVE this...... Thank you so much this was hot....pls write a prt 2 about the husbands friend blackmailing her.
hot hot hot, and well written. no wasted story line but had a great build-up. a great fantasy of mine and very erotic
We’re not handing out awards for grammar and literature here. This is a hot story. I enjoyed it. Give us some more.
Whoever helped you edit this needs work. Impossible to continue sucking his cock is you start on your knees then stand straight up, unless he’s four feet long.