All Comments on 'Special Present'

When you write a story, please use spell-check and double check your grammar before submitting it. Beside the fact that the story jumps all over the place, the grammatical errors are really annoying.

your literature style is your own, I enjoyed it! Keep up the writing, I especially enjoyed some of the more personal lines in this lover's tryst-twist tale. Keep up the good work!

where a college has a rule against pregnant women attending?

Illegal much?