All Comments on 'Special Weapons and Tactics Ch. 04'

Great appetizer! Can't wait for more.

Too short! Hopefully, the following chapter(s) will follow quickly. Thanks for the interesting story. I'll give you the benefit of the doubt - 5*

Just preparing the following chapters...And from the subplots, the story is far from ending...And that is always a risky thing, because the readers interest can become lower and lower...Let's see where the author will lead us...3* for now

6 weeks out of academy and he's assigned to a crack SWAT team? Don't write about things you don't know about unless you can fake it and you can't .

anything else when it comes to women except hate. You're full of it. Shit from the top of your head to the bottom f your feet. perhaps you should stop writing comments on LW stories. BTW asshole of LIT how many stories have you written on here or anywhere else. What a dumbass you are. gave this a big old 5,.

He was on patrol and went in before swat was deployed. At least try to comprehend what you're critiquing before you go off on a rant.

VOTE 1* FOR EVERY STORY RATED BY THAT FAT DUMB WHORE VASTIESMITH2 AKA BONNIETAYLOR2 AKA ANON!

... This does look like it's setting up to be a long series. My main concern with that isn't so much aimed at this author as it is a general complaint based on experience. I often cringe when an author let's on they are sharing a lengthy story with us and apparently submitting chapters as they are completed. My bookmarks have several submission pages for authors of unfinished series that have promises of eventual completion either in comments or their bio, but, alas, they remain unfinished. Most of the time the author has essentially vanished and given up, but the really frustrating ones are the authors who continue to offer good stories but have other series that remain unfinished. This author has completed a couple multi-chapter stories already so I'm less concerned about this one specifically. I guess I'm hoping justbobkc knows where this story is going and how it ends. Venting completed...thanks for indulging my rant. Looking forward to the rest of the story...5* to help make up for the reading comprehension-challenged anonny

to end this thing. Lots going on....

but up close and personal, reality sets in, TK U MLJ LV NV

I sure feel for John though...

Stuck in a very very bad position. Smartest thing he could do is remain separated from his ex...

1. Always have a digital mini audio recorder with him or nearby in case she has an "episode."

2. Make sure you can get to witnesses quickly.

3. Always be alert if she is around sharp or hard objects. She may use them!

These things protected me when my ex went off on me.

Please dont have reconciliation to the point of remarriage. That would be such an incredibly sad ending.

Sincerely,

Payenbrant

Lord knows I'm no expert, but didn't anyone know to check the back entrance?

the way you want it. I came from a large family where "divorce" was a family hobby after my mom died when I was a small child; and everyone in the family had at least one and some 5 or more. Somehow I ended up married nearly 50 years to the same woman and still am. I spent my entire life as a military officer and/or a copper. I know it doesn't happen often and it ain't easy, but marriages on the rocks are saved, and people do rehabilitate. I agree it is difficult; when it happens that is something to crow about. Some of you authors are very good at psychotherapy but your glass is more often half empty instead of half full and you reflect the emptiness of people far more than redemption... If that were reality there would never be a definition of mental illness and Fantasy would also fail to exist.

You are close enough to your subject to be interesting ( I lived you protagonist's life for over 4 decades and while not spot on you do an acceptable job of relating). However, coppers get cynical far too often because they bottle up compassion and bolster "Machismo" more than necessary. A Caring Copper is a stronger Copper and

More apt to be a better Copper who makes it through a long career far healthier than many of the brotherhood I know. My job was to serve and protect my community AND My Family as well.

Lots a luck in your writing - just a few commas and wrong tense "was" applications to edit

An old editor

Those are armor piercing bullets. They were developed to kill mostly soldiers, and anyone else it hits. Its a bullet! To call a bullet a "cop killer" is a politically contrived phrase to denigrate firearm ownership. And please get some education on the subject. The Teflon coating is to protect the barrel of the gun from the projectiles hardened jacket! Has nothing to do with piercing Kevlar vests; the hardened bullets do that quite nicely without any lubrication. Talk about being fucked.

So I just hope that euphemism does not reflect a liberal political bias, which means you will portray Susan in every and all ways as a victim, and John is just a heartless cruel vengeful asshole, like all men, and Republicans. OK, teasing just a little. But it often seems to come out that way.

Really, its an enjoyable story which I still have not rated since I can't tell where its going or why. And yes, the comprehensive story affects my rating of each chapter, since I am rating the story, not the parts. In any event, thank you for your time and effort in writing this. I hope the good people win and the bad people spend eternity in hell sucking cock. Oops, guess there's more than a few readers (you know who you are) who might think that sounds like heaven. God help us.

i had rather read a story fifteen or so pages long, than keep having to look for the next chapter and hope I remember the prior

As far as reading this 'cop killer bullets' was the last straw.

Armor piercing bullets made for soldiers and police to use, which have been smeared by the media since 1981.

The first ones the media tagged that were ONLY sold to military and police, so if cops were getting killed with them it was 'blue on blue'.

@Anon, about the "cop killer" bullets and your concerns about liberalism, who the fuck cares? It's a story. And as for the politics, I thought you cons are supposed to Christians, too, so what are you doing on this site? Typical

Justbob, I'm enjoying the story, and am curious where it's going. Thanks

Really liking the story but reminding me of old tv shows that gave a bit each week to keep you coming back for more. Please speed it up lol

What is the point if this story? Especially on an erotica site and in a section about cheating? I'm seriously asking? Because put this anywhere else that isn't a porn site for angry, bitter, conservative old men and this fails as any kind of compelling drama or any kind of interesting character piece. Yet here, it also completely fails as an erotic story. So it's not good erotica and it's not good literature. It's just bad.

Oh but bad things happened to a woman? A "real man" has good things happen to him? Well, get out those five star rankings because that's literally all that matters any more in this section. Pandering to the lowest common denominator of angry, lonely old men.

....while I agree the pacing might be picked up a bit, I am enjoying the story and the journey it is taking us along.

Stay your course....it is a good one.

Oh, try to get clarity on the correct uses of "too" and "to", "then" and "than".

Tired of the chiding? Well, it'll stop when you get it right.

In all other regards, Thank you.

John has more problems than he deserves but that makes a story.

She's trying to get her husband back but flirts with a total stranger the day he leaves. She accepts a date with him the very next day. He even asks if it's ok to take the very drug that caused the bulk of her problems, and she says yes. She pops some without a moments hesitation, passionately makes out with him, allows him to finger fuck her to orgasm and sucks his dick. Granted, the rest was unwanted. But, she put herself in this situation. Please, do not ask me to feel sorry for her.

I guess you missed the part where it was explained that because of budgetary restrictions, most all the cops on swat pulled normal shifts. The officer killed was not a member of the swat team. His partner was. They answered the call before the call went out for all swat team members to arm and get ready at the station.

The law office the 'rich pretentious assholes' that your protag is railing against getting HIS people killed...they are BLAMELESS.

They owned a ton of art. They GUARDED their ton of art. They had a frigging security system. They had armed guards. They owned guns of their own.

They did nothing wrong and did due diligence to protect their property. More!

So him bitching about the 'blame' that accrues to the rich...it is because he is envious. It is because his people were stupid and unprofessional. The lawyer did EXACTLY what he could to protect all his people. It is not his fault that he got robbed. It is not his fault that Karen was a weak willed idiot.

It is the fault of her boss that she did the wrong thing. Who would that be?

Just a bit of cheap resentment baiting that rubs me the wrong way.

I guess I feel that most police have it drummed into their heads to wait for backup, but I guess they didn't know the situation well. I thought the guy phoning in the 911 would have clued people in, but you never know. Yes, Susan STILL seems to not have her head screwed on right, taking risks like that. Basically, rule #1 for married people is not to go out and drink solo with the opposite sex. Period. If this was followed, the LW site would be pretty slim. Another nice chapter to this story.