All Comments on 'Speed Freak'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

I may not have enjoyed this style or the structure of the story, but some of these anon commenters are the bad sort of freaks. Calm down, take your meds, and go read a story that appeals to your particular taste.

BrendaNWBrendaNWover 7 years ago
a nice start

I liked the general concept and hot sexy feeling, but I am not really comfortable with the negative slurs toward police or any group.. all negatives should be reserved for the specific person after you know them well enough to tell.. anyone can turn out to be an asshole or bitch in their right *** but please continue your writing as your concepts and characters show great promise.. Tiffany TG

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