All Comments on 'Spell, Crook and Handle'

On par with your other works. Please continue I've enjoyed your other works and look forward to this one continuing.

Awesome story hope more to come

Excellent, just like everything you write, would love to see where you'd take us from here.

Maybe the weirdest story I've ever read. 'Hooked me in an enchanting way, and I couldn't stop reading. Not incest, since it turned out to be the succubus taking the part of sis and mom, but the impression was there anyhow, and he loved it anyway. ???

This was definitely the most interesting story that I have read on this site.

This was a very well written story I at first didn't like the beginning but the more I read the more I love the story I hope there's another part of it or a continuing series would be fantastic

This is the best story I have read on here in a long time .It is defiantly one of the top two . Please write another chapter hell write a book I would buy it . Thank you it's been a long time since I got this interested in a story .

it kept me awake. but maybe I should read it again to understand !

I am currently working on the next chapter. I am glad you have enjoyed this piece. This was inspired by one of those 'wow what a weird dream' moments. Thank you for the feedback!!

Gotta say the begining was kinda weird style felt a little akward but once he found that magic it def picked up would love to read a sequel and apretty good plotlline

A good mini-novel, there.

Really great writing quality, I encourage you to do more or even try making it professionally.

This was a damn good story and will patiently wait for another chapter!!

Great story! Good job.

But all the missing question marks, typos and dialogue issues kept you from a 5 star rating.

This story is not finished!! please don't let it be finished.

This is one intense story - very very good and certainly arousing !! Please

continue, as we need to have brother and sister go at it again with new found love and hot sex ......... of course his sister suffers no harm hopefully !! The coin - could it be a way to take the spell away for the bad / evil parts and keep / expand the good powers ?? Maybe, he can increase his sexual powers and get others to join his sister and himself and finally shed any remaining demons ....... Thank you.

the story could go in soooo many directions the sequels are unlimited.

I agree with some other comments. The imagination shown was creative, but the technical aspects of the writing were sloppy, sorry.

Starting with a succubus was a great idea and with the backstory you chose for your main character, you have quite a lot of options to go from here. This is a story you really should continue. I prefer the longer stories as I don't read solely for the sex and that means you need to have actual story and you did that well.

I would like to see his sister involved from here forward as well, should you decide to continue this story. She makes an obvious choice for an anchor for him to retain his humanity and that gives options for further romance with her.

TL;DR: Great story, please continue it.

an excellent play on words.

maybe it's just me(maybe I didn't get it) but have a few issues need explaining !

We never got an explanation on a few things

Was his sister or demon when they first fucked

Never really explained or resolved why mother was "sick" when sister came to get him from cabin

From this point on the story got real weird & went to different place altogether

EG

Why would you make a big deal about(The demon pulled an envelope from her clutch purse. I took it and looked it over. There was a wax seal on the back and by the looks of it opening it before midnight would be dangerous) Then never explain or even mention the envelope again ?

Next Mrs McDaniel.then a dig in China etc etc

Hope you contiune with the story & explain it so we can understand #WTF is going on

ASAP

Very good story. I hope for a second chapter.

Please continue this story. This has to be one of the best stories of this type I have ever read. If you (the author) were to make it into a full length book I am sure it would be a hit. It has that special touch of magic, adventure and sex that combine to totally capture the reader and submerge them into the world of the story. Please, don't let this one end here, you owe it to the fans of the genre to continue adding to this wonderful creation.

Dude you should continue this story its got potential out the ass

this story is awesome. Please continue it.

Fantastic read!

I really liked how this started, but everything from when the succubus showed up onward felt very rushed.

Very hot, nicely written and very sexy and intriging plot, please continue this story

all the magic shit killed the story, it would have been better in the sci-fi area NOT HERE.

This was a great yarn. I loved it. I look forward to reading more of your writing.

I'm telling you right now this is make one hell of a good movie. Keep up the imagination in the good work.

I love the story. Very good concept and it's plenty good enough for me to continue. However, you really needed an editor for this one, the errors were kinda throwing me out of the story. Good job anyway.

I am so glad that I found this story! So well written, and so damn yummy too! Thank you!

Huh. I was loving it until he made his sister forget and didn't tell her for months. That's actually where I am right now. I'm gonna finish the story out of respect for the actual skill here, and because you might fix this later.

This would be a good 15 page romantic story. Sadly, it's a mediocre 7 page wank story. Lemme contribute:

Introduce people. The friend that held onto the bag didn't even have a name or face. His preparations on the necklace thing too.

Develop relationships. He doesn't get jealous about the cowboy when the sister first meets him? Fine, but ELABORATE on that. His relationships are nothing and that makes for a shallow story.

The relationships are all super dull. His sister was good, then the obvious huge change in the story came with the succubus; she was being possessed? Wtf does that mean? Does she not want him anymore? Did she forget? What about the fact that they fucked before he found the book? This was a great opportunity for an a-ha moment developing their relationship further, one that you really could have used. You don't elaborate as if it was literally just sex with no strings attached whatsoever, as if the main character doesn't care. Now, he is an idiot, as was made clear when he hid the book from his sister, but developed emotional attachment could make this story actually good.

There is potential, I'll give you that. If you take this down, work on it and upload it again, 15-20 pages so that people actually have personalities and emotions and the relationships aren't crap, this could become a very good one.

Sadly I must agree with the previous comments below. Love his sister though. … but as for the story ⭐️⭐️⭐️