All Comments on 'Spells and Sea Stars'

The question I have is how do two men have a family together when neither can have a baby. It is a good story but there needs to be a bit more descriptions in this story. Why were the guys looking at the site to begin with? What happened to Ryan after his friend told him to go back in? Did he freak out or what? Too many unanswered questions come up for me. I will say though, it is a good quick story.

Lovely story, as for the question of him having a family, my own take he became a merman and his anatomy changed meaning he could have children... Loved this story. Short and sweet.

Loved it but poor Ryan was left in the dust. It would have been cool for Erik to turn around and convince Ryan to join them into the merman. I dunno. It was still awesome!

It was a nice story, but in all honesty I'm haunted by the fact I recognize that spell from a phase in 7th grade where i wanted to be a mermaid 😂😭 I feel like i would have enjoyed it a lot more if I hadn't been knocked unconcious by memories of my own cringe. (Still a very good story though :) )