All Comments on 'Spencer's Canyon'

I'd love to see a threesome with our stud and mama and daughter Spencer!

I look forward to more adventures.

Cliff Hager calls for more please

Says it all.

Deffo more, good story, nice young stud and mature ladies,only complaint are the bloody condoms. Horrible things.

This resort seems like a good place for some recurring characters to show up. Maybe Danny O'Sulivans mother, or even a major character like Becca shows up and just likes to tease the help at the resort.

In regards to this story: Loved the titty fucking scene. I just wish there was a bit more build up before the sex. For me I like the "will they or wont they" lead up.

Great idea and great writing

This deserves more.... would also like to see more in on the train and the milf next door

I echo and reverb and amplify all previous comments. I have so missed your submissions. More, PLEASE!!!

More please about 10 more should do!

The possibilities are endless

Next?

As an earlier said, the possibilities are endless, from a regular story to a fantasy(genie type find) (or a nymph spring dweller) to even a sci-fi twist...very intrigued to see where you go. *nods and sips his whiskey as he wanders off*

love to see more installments, especially with items regarding his relationship with the owner. Seems you may be angling her to be his only love and exclusive prize. I would certainly like to see that.

More....

The other pool boy stories have got nothing on you. Looking forward to more stories from Spencer’s Canyon.

a whore house story. where all the scum gathers...

hell yeah! Definitely want more! A full blown sexcapade with Sylvie would be good, including anal, followed by a 3some with Elena and that receptionist girl... A part 2 is definitely of the order. Don't disappoint us!

I would’ve loved to be in his shoes. What an idea job!

Yes, definitely more!

Remember Daphnee from the airplane? She should show up here

more asap please

Looking forward to more adventures here!!!!

This was such a good story until you used “”snatch” to describe a woman’s pussy, clit or vagina on page 2. I just couldn’t read anymore; it ruined the story for me! Though I’m sure the men will love it! Regards! T

Only on page 1 so far, but confused. What school is he going to? I took it he was 18 but trying to finish in a hurry, which was bad enough. He thought and acted like a teen, thus my assumption. But then he becomes 22! What danged school is he attending? At this age he would have had 4 years at university already. Fast finishing with extra credits means equal to 5 years or so? Is he going for a doctorate or such, but then cannot just bugger off half way through research.

My suggestion would be for Alicia to turn out to be Alicia Spenser, Elena's daughter. Perhaps a threesome with Scott, Alicia and Elena? Doesn't necessarily have to be incestuous (that's up to you), could be just Elena and Alicia sharing Scott together. Then, if the story goes on for a while, perhaps Scott could eventually marry into the family?

And maybe an end-of-season pussy-eating contest between Scott and the new girl, who so impressed Elena during her "interview". That would give Scott the whole season to hone his pussy-eating skills on the various guests and staff.

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One thing seemed off to me, you twice mentioned the large, limo parking spaces, but who would want to take their immaculate, stretch limo down a "narrow gravel road" with a "tight hairpin turn" in it? If I owned a limo, I wouldn't want to risk messing up the paint job by taking it down a narrow, gravel road through the woods.

And if all of the locals know the resort is there, what's the sense in simply disguising its entrance? Anyone could still drive down there. A fence and guard shack, somewhere along a totally paved driveway, would have made more sense. It might be different if the clientele was showing up in 4x4s & SUVs to a rustic resort, but this is ultimately a high-end, luxury one.

Granted these are minuscule points in a sex story, but a good author (which you are) should strive for all aspects of the story to make logical sense.

"The difference between fiction and reality? Fiction has to make sense."

~ Best-selling author, Tom Clancy

I would like to see him sample a wide variety of women. A tall slender redhead with not overly sized breasts, a shorter latina with big breasts and a full round butt, a milk chocolate honey, etc.

I definitely want to hear more about events at the Canyon.

Nice story but page 4 let it down. So much more could be written. It has the makings of a very good story. Add more please

Co-workers and clients; so many possibilities and "only" 4 months or does he decide to not go back to school? Write on!

So many unfinished stories. You need to get busy again. Your fans are waiting.

Please more!!!!!!!

Deff want to read more of his adventures! Please let us know soon!

Be good if you carried this one on. Been reading all your stories and really enjoyed them. Guess I'm a fan now! Might even set up an account now!

You certainly should add to this one, it has the start of an awesome series all over it.

I can imagine a series of ten or more chapters to explore this new paradise for a horny 22 year old. Linda sounds interested as well AND there's Elena's daughter to be "had". Maybe wedding her and the legacy continue?

What a great story, full of characters and sex, well thought out plot, hope to see more soon.

Are you a mean person that gets a threal out of hurting your readers? I can imagine that to be the case as what began as a story with soo many paths opened and yet ended with a unfinished whimper.

Almost the X-Rated version of Elvis Presley's "Tickle Me". [LOL] 5 stars; although there should have been more of the story.

Hawt, Hawt, Hawt!

11/10!!!!!

From a guy named Spencer (no lie!)

Dam nice after school job. All I ever got was a paper route and mowing lawns and then on to the Navy, lol.

We had the same experience with the Champaign. Please kiss and tell us another story (!)

Great story but the ending was rather abrupt.That spoiled the build up of the story. What about Scott's interest in Alicia? And Linda? And further rounds with Elena?

Five Stars...

Where is the next chapter, please??!!

Nice! Hope this gets a follow up