All Comments on 'Spenser for Hire: Love & Need Ch. 02'

Once again, a masterful job of matching Parker's style! Part 3, please! Rita and Susan??? Or Spenser and Rita???

Excellent job. I couldn't remember which of Spenser's lovers Susan was but I fantasized that it was Carolyn McCormick who portrayed one of them and then went on to play the Psychitrist on Law and Order. She is gorgeous and perfect for that black stud Hawk.

You gotta continue this storyline..it is absolutely wonderful.

As a fan of the series, it was a refreshing respite into what we all sometimes feel is smoldering underneath the public dynamic of their relationship. Loved the way you really nailed the rythym, venacular and speech patterns in the dialog. Just a really great job. And the surprise at the end was an unexpected treat. Got any more?

Sexquestrian at yahoo.

Having written my own Veronica Mars story, I know tricky it is to mimic the source material while depicting something that would be out of character for the source material to depict. You nailed it, and offered some good laughs along the way.