by testudo
horror genres. I know there have been tougher/darker stories than this in non human before, though.
The bit at the end there killed the story pretty good for me. I mean, it's a pretty silly scenario to begin with, but I guess you can get some sort of depth out of it if you explore the more negative aspects of the situation (of which there are plenty), or alternatively just settle for smut in a sci-fi setting. Going so far as to just discard the women afterwards makes for some really uncomfortable smut though.
Other than that, it was okay I guess, though it felt a bit rushed.
not so sure most of the female readers will bite into this story to much.. seems you've made us into disposable egg layers lol