by Madam_X
Nice story, I
However I found the spider's gender switched a couple of times. First it was male, then it was female?
ive always found spiders fascinating and maybe its the hentai watcher in me but i always found the idea of being ravaged by some giant creature very erotic. i would love this to happen to me ... maybe without dieing though lol. i totally understand how it was the realistic and more terrifying ending and honestly there was no better way to end the story. 5 stars.
One or two clunky lines here and there, but overall, very good - an enjoyable read with a dark ending. My kind of story.
Chilling and titillating. Well done and thanks. Hope to read more from you about beautiful damsels in "sextress".