All Comments on 'Spies and Lovers Ch. 01'

by ALandRF

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
It looks like this one is a winner!

Nice premise, excelling writing, hope there many chapters to follow.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Does Not Quite Make It

In reading the story it seems to drag and not flow - do not know quite how to explain that feeling. I do hope you will continue writing because you have shown an interesting story idea.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Like it.

Very good story, please add more chapters!

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