All Comments on 'Spinning'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Really???

Even for fiction that was unbelievably dumb. Nowhere was I ever convinced that he wanted to be there or that he wanted to be abused. Just plain dumb.

JamesRTickitJamesRTickitover 8 years ago
Pure fantasy

and you got all your pleasures into one story - well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Summing it up:

Not worth reading. Too many mistakes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
GJ

I liked it. You kept it simple. Purely a stroke story, no need to go into a backstory for the guy or make me feel sorry about him. She could've been a little more devious at the end there. Add a bit of humiliation, leave him without clothes... something so that it doesn't go foreplay, anal, done.

welder315welder315over 8 years ago
great story

it is a really good story ,too bad I never found one of those places

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