by quirkyqueen
Even for fiction that was unbelievably dumb. Nowhere was I ever convinced that he wanted to be there or that he wanted to be abused. Just plain dumb.
I liked it. You kept it simple. Purely a stroke story, no need to go into a backstory for the guy or make me feel sorry about him. She could've been a little more devious at the end there. Add a bit of humiliation, leave him without clothes... something so that it doesn't go foreplay, anal, done.
it is a really good story ,too bad I never found one of those places