All Comments on 'Spirit of the Sword Ch. 01'

Beautifully written. The scenes flowed and the dialogue is great!

This is an interesting story, I am looking forward (rather impatiently lol) to see how you progress this one.

Good work :)

Good story but I think it's a little slow paced and I think I prefer Love's Curse to be honest... Please go back to writing Love's Curse again soon!

We havn't abandoned Love's Curse. We are simply extending our horizons and making full use of our overflowing creative idea.

... does this mean that you've abandoned "Love's Curse"? I was SO looking forward to its conclusion!

Great start, can't wait for more.