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All Comments on 'Splashed'

by heerkittykitty

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

It was good, but a little rushed, I hope you do more.

quiverclawquiverclawalmost 13 years ago
way to short...

your story started out very well but you spent more time on the background than you did on the sex part.

kevfun714kevfun714almost 13 years ago
Nice start

I cant wait to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
to fast

I thnk that it whent to fast and to little dietail

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
ummm okay

so weres the other two thirds of the story? Ya got a good start and then it just ends with nonthing happening. So I ask again, wheres the other two thirds?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Make it longer, so, tell us what happened next.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

It was nice but a little short.A sequel would be great

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