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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Nice!

I enjoyed your series. I thought that it might have headed toward Madison getting spanked by all the men (including her Uncle) in the campsite, but I did like the results when the girl's true nature did come out.

Thank you.

RetroFanRetroFanover 9 years agoAuthor
Pleased You Liked It

I'm glad you liked my story series 'Spoiled Princess Hates Camping'.

I wanted to keep it realistic, unlike other fetish stories where the plotlines become so far fetched, outlandish and implausible it ruins the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
strange ending

Good story but s very disappointing ending.

marilynf50tmarilynf50tover 5 years ago
Loved this story!!

I felt some parts were long and drawn out but once the story started going it was REALLY good !!

Marilynf50t!!

RetroFanRetroFanover 5 years agoAuthor
Hot Spoiled Girls

Thanks for the recent positive feedback.

This story was interesting to write. Madison is a horrible person - spoiled, selfish, entitled and demanding - who doesn't really learn anything yet is still hot, and people enjoyed reading about this spoiled girl.

I can't see a story about a spoiled guy could work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I would have rated this much higher but the insistent slamming or put down of a Christian man made me hate it.

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