All Comments on 'Spoils of War Ch. 04'

by HammerGod

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CelticAngelsCelticAngelsover 11 years ago

So where do the tribes children come from none of the men mention having children

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
meh...

Better than the other ones, but it would be nice if there was some justice against Alma who tortured Sven so viciously and still didn't think she did anything wrong.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I agree with CelticAngel that is a very unusual plot hole. Though this may be intentional.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Very good

I would elect you to be a male representative for the femdom nation

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

This was bad.... Chapter 1 was best.. ANd 2.3.4 was.. Not so good...

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Cant wait for more from you.

Don't listen to these people. I enjoyed your series very much. I really like that it wasn't hardcore female domination, but more of a real story. It was written very well and was a great ending to the series. Thank you for shating this and all your stories(I have read them all). Again, awesome series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
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so magnus did not do it, Nice plot twist

Good story, though as a male I call complete and utter bullshit on the Eluvian whole way of life. But I cannot judged what I don't know.

Nice story and glad that you had characters that weren't utter monsters

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
What crap

Unleash the devil in all men and see whether the Elveran realmn can withstand the slaughter /Fiction born from a woman desire to hide their physical weakness.

ichewyouichewyouover 11 years ago
Great stories!

I really liked the whole series. Have you thought about a prequel or side story going more in depth into the House of Penance?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Good story

Personally if I was treated like that guy and I didn't have a nice mistress id kill every woman in that village....probly im sure I can find a way cuz thats bullshit everyone you love murdered and your supposed to be grateful fuck that srry for language ^-^ good story though it was interesting

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Amazing story. :)

Amazing story. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
amazing

amazing story :)

ZoaruonZoaruonover 8 years ago
Awesome!!!!!

Awesome man!!! I absolutely love it!!! But please don't tell me that this is the end of story. It is too good to end this early. Keep on writing man!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

That was an entertaining story, great mix of elements a few kinks but still one of the best on this site

MyLadyInChainsMyLadyInChainsabout 5 years ago
Clapping hands in delight!

Would it be possible to get the location of this outpost? And would they allow a human woman to join their warriors?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Fuck this shit dude. Magnus should have killed all of those bastard females.

GayKatGayKatalmost 2 years ago

Thank-You And 5-Stars, For The Author, It's Interesting!

Hallo HG!

Spoils of War Ch. 04 is will written, but for a couple of really kinky sadistic dykes, it just doesn't make our favorite list..

The Black Queen and Gay Kat.

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