All Comments on 'Sports Bar Pickup Ch. 02'

by victory_4_val

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duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Sexual Attractions!

Tara has the delightful invitation to take Kim while Kim's roommate Alexis watches them. This is a hot sensual highly erotic story. This Chapter heats up the action even more. Wonderful Read.

jakebarnes06jakebarnes06over 17 years ago
Two for two!

"'I heard screaming. Holy shit it was me,'" realized the "pretty shady looking older guy" as he looked down at the mess dripping from his left hand. He had just taken his eye from the small but powerful telescope set semi-permanently in front of his window, across the street from the apartment occupied by those two young women.

Another great write Val. I can't wait to read what I'll next be watching from afar.

NiceGuyInVaNiceGuyInVaalmost 17 years ago
Great Job

Highly erotic. I especially loved Tara making Kim eat her ass. That was a super turn on. Great characters and great writing. Looking forward to chapter 3

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