All Comments on 'Sports Star'

It was a nice story but it's like reading the first couple of chapters of a book and just skipping to the final chapter, just felt there was so much to expand on and explore there especially with them both saying they had to straighten out their lives. but anyway good read.

She's undressed, then somehow dressed in a completely different outfit to get undressed again? She's laying on the bed next to him, then he picks her up and lays her on the bed? He's standing in his boxers, then somehow he undresses again? They are in the bedroom, then in some other room only to walk back into the bedroom. Thoroughly confused, I felt like it was a first draft or a cut/paste job.