by LustyLee77
Interesting concept, for pure stroke material, but there is no buildup of sexual tension, and the sex scenes themselves aren't well developed.
The story has potential, but definitely also has room for improvement.
I loved it, loved the way I was slowly sucked in, and violently blasted off at the end. Very good.
I'm a guy who reads Lesbian stories because I like women's sexuality, and stories that just build and build like women's orgasms. Lusty Lee, you're a man, aren't you?
Rayge