All Comments on 'Spring Break Awakening'

it was nice i started taking care of my brothers when they would come home from dates and girlfriends when we was growing up i really enjoyed bed time lol

You should use a spell checker or get an editor. Some sentences were hard to follow with misspelled words. Too bad a good story was ruined for me.

It's a shame that a hot bro-sis incest story such as yours is marred by those spelling errors. Quality control is the key. Next time, either get an editor or go over your work several times with a fine-tooth comb to catch those pesky mistakes.

He didn't properly hangup the phone and the mother was listening then run with that. Assuming you really don't want to end it here.

A very arousing story !! You have to write another chapter or two as Daisy now needs to make some changes so she and her brother can fully enjoy more so their new found sexual relationship. Daisy

has really gotten into this and so has her " baby brother ". They have to develop a plan to keep this from their parents and find a way to keep doing it regularly w/o getting caught. Thank you !!!

Why is that your best works are non-rape and why is that you never make them into a series!? This one is so sweet and has lots of potential to any which way. Gave it a 5!

Enough to get me intrested in brother sister stories.

Please continue if you can.

Adding the parents wouldn't be bad.

Brothers and sisters often get together after one has a break up. Compassion leads to passion. It is really a good situation if careful and not too possessive.

Just enough character to make you interested in them, especially Daisy's little devil side. Just enough dialogue to make it believable. It was really sexy and arousing. And it ended with an obvious continuation that need not be told for us to know.

4/5 stars due to it being a 2 page story. 5's are for novels =]

When you said plump sister I imagined Natasha Nice. Damn!

[02.08.22]

Hawt, HaWT, HAWT!

11/10!!!!!

A very hot read & I wish my sister had been so randy.

Her on her hands & knees offering herself to him was what really got me aroused.

4 stars from me.

Oh well. I guess Rubenesque just ain't my cup of tea . . . .