All Comments on 'Spring Break Vacation Ch. 04'

have somebody read through your work before submitting and so avoid silly spelling and typographical errors. No point in spoiling the ship for a hap'oth (just a few cents!) of tar. Otherwise, not bad at all.

I caught some of that after it posted. Truth is, I’ve been so busy moving and starting a new job I haven’t had a chance to update the story in months, and I just wanted to get it out.

If you’re available to read through pre-submitted stories, let me know!

I love this series. I hope you return to it and finish it.

And I hope you haven't given up on it. I thought it was off to a great start and had a lot of potential.