All Comments on 'Spun'

You write very well and I enjoyed reading your story. Are there plans for a sequel?

Thank you for sharing. Easily worth 5 stars.

These are the thoughts of an abused girl, haunted with horrible low esteem, mistreatment and woe.

What a lovely job you've done with this as you introduce the dawn of hope to her. She realizes, through all the possible unknown pitfalls ahead, that there yet may be happiness in the world for her.

You are a wordsmith of the top order and I enjoyed this somewhat dark but hopeful story.

Thank you for writing.

5*

Best regards,

-Pultoy

A beautiful story about true selfless healin love! Very well written drawing us into Ginny's inner life. Keep up the good work! Fl marks

One of my favorites. So glad you reposted this.

Very well done.

Beautiful

Insightful and ultimately beautiful

you are my favorite girl in the entire moon.

Good to see it back online. Thank you.

5 stars. Nice work. It is good to see one of your wounded girls get healed. Very powerful writing. Might have liked to know a little more of the back story of her healer but this is a very good story. Thanks for your work.

Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to future submissions.

Hope you keep writing and posting. You say a lot with just a few words.

GIM:

You are a master of words. It's a rare pleasure to open up one of your stories and know I have a few minutes or an hour of escape. And, that when I return from the journey on which your story takes me, I will be refreshed and even rejoicing at the secret you've shared, that secret of suffering, doubt, angst and fear; all resolved and hopeful.

Thank you for writing. 5*

Best regards,

-Pultoy

Wow. I...I'm speechless. That was remarkable. That should be published.

beautifully written story, even though it was not very erotic. Enjoyed the length, because of the "character development"

...to the quality of GITM's stories is the number of comments left by other writers. I'd be over the (GirlInThe) moon to see these kinds of constructively-critical yet glowing comments on our own works. Reading these, I've been mentally taking notes on how to develop characters that readers can connect with, even if the characters aren't necessarily pleasant people. Great job on all of your stories! Please post more.

A Perfect match. He has the threads of Love. She has a heart to mend.

The spinning has stopped, it's 'heads' forever.

Yet again, one more wonderfully written tale, of Love & healing. An intricately spun web of sorrows & hope.

5 is too less. Thank You we must.

but so glad it finally worked out.

thanks

Meant to give it 5 stars and hit four--wouldn't let me change. Anyway, you have a unique voice in your stories.

Very analytical and not everyone's cup of tea. - but an excellent read.

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There is a wide spectrum of content on this site, but few stories draw you into the character so much that you start to feel what the character is living. All of nervous hope, panic, depression and joy are presented in a loving manner by GirlintheMoon. Spun goes beyond the normal expectations of adequate plot, dialogue and structure; it embraces the short story as an art form.

Everyone carries some kind of baggage, some good and some bad. This story made me feel like I was there as it unfolded.

There are a lot of damaged people in this world such as the protagonists of this story. I've been blessed to know such couples and the love and trust they are able to share. Healing is a wonderful thing :)

I read a GirlintheMoon story, and I give 5 stars. Best writer in Literotica.

I know this is probably a forlorn hope, but I would really like to hear how their story progresses, and hear her tell her story so she can release some of the burden she bears. Any chance?

It was just starting to get GOOD and then you stop. WHY????????????????

Excellent!

Brilliantly conducted from broken and in pain to a happy ending.

Five it is!

You always begin with the Basics:

Deeply Felt and Honestly Stated.

Thank you!

More! We need more! There is soooo much more to be offered and told! There is soooo much past to be shared and soooo much future to be shared - forever - To The Moon And Back!!!!

Please - More - and a Finish!!!!

Incredible. The tears won't stop...

Very moving, thank you.

Very good, an odd story but good. If you told more it would have to be any pages. Sometimes things just are. And you leave them there

Such a sweet story