All Comments on 'Spunky Blackmail Ch. 01'

Great story

I can't wait to see where it goes

Wonderful !

Good little story....keep it going!!

Yes, it does seem as if little sister forbids the very things she REALLY wants..... and is begging to be made do lots of nasty things before he gives her back the stolen money..... ALL sorts of possibilities...and NO time for him to be shy!! LOL

I'll admit this one had me going back and forth: he presents himself like a nice everyman, then he keeps saying assaholic, mixed message things like: "We'd fuck each others brains out and that would be that." and then it's all, eh, 'sex with Tara ain't so great, yadda yadda.' So I'm going to assume we're allowed to think this guy's a bit of a jerk!

That said, him and Courtney are a well-paired team of jerks. Their dialogue is interestingly circular in a believable way that strains (deliberately, I think) the reader's patience: like god, you people, just say what's on your mind! The more I got into it, the more interesting it becomes.

My final indictment against the narrator (so far!): get some lotion, or lube or something! Spit spit spit spit! So dirty!

Him and Courtney could be a real love story. I sense an elective affinity. I just hope poor Tara doesn't get too hurt! But so far, it's hard to say whether Tara is even the (non-sexual) dream gf he claims she is. Courtney might prove to be much more clever.

All teasing aside, this proved to be pretty intriguing. I'll be curious to see what evolves.

An interesting story that I could relate to. Keep on writing!

The plot is interesting and your characters are actually interesting.. I feel like this might fit better in Nonconsent/Reluctance though.

Great job of integrating an arousing stroke-story with interesting and believable characters.

Great writing really, it makes me want to get back into writing erotica again. Utterly credible characters, plot, pacing and a smouldering submissive/seductress in a captivating cocktail of concupiscence. A class, 5stars. Nicely done.

The grimy, grungy and nuanced sexuality here is fantastic. I really enjoy the reluctance overcome by lust. Besides that, I dated a girl just like the gf, and lusted after her sister with the lovely chest...

Shot my biggest loads after finshing all 4 chapters on different days/ nights.... Full on sexy n erotic!!! Keep up our dicks!!! 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

Who in the fuck sniffs spit?

He was a total scum bag .. hated this story ...

Yup, he’s a scumbag but the story’s hotter than hell.

Bill

Not real big on forced sex…sorry.