All Comments on 'Spy Games Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More

This story needs a 3rd Chapter starting with the three of them making love and finishing with them coming home to their future.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Close to perfect

Needed some fucking but I felt like I was in each room. I know the madam butterfly songs and imagined them playing. Beautiful sequel, dont delay with more.

Turtle1952Turtle1952about 6 years ago
More please

Just getting to the hot sexy part where the 3 of them share a bed and some body fluids. Will bro & sis stay together as a couple? Maybe they all live together.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
; le gran tour!

plus, plus, s'il vous plait!!

Lone_HawkLone_Hawkabout 6 years ago

I love how this story is going and also hope there is at least another chapter coming.

goducks1goducks1about 6 years ago
another 5 star story!!

loved it. great story line, very erotic. love the 3 characters and the dialogue. well done! looking forward to a lot of sex in chapters 3 AND 4 - yes - definitely needs AT LEAST 2 more chapters. Thanks for a great read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Definitely more please! This story could go on forever!

xsiveonexsiveoneabout 6 years ago
I concurr!

I concur with all the others, more please. I found this chapter after commenting on the first. Thank you for continuing and please add on to this tale, it's progressing beautifully.

HighpikeHighpikeabout 6 years ago
Beautiful

There really does have to more than this - please?

malc690malc690about 6 years ago
really good story

you're fast becoming on of the better writers on this site, please keep the stories coming

sunburycdsunburycdabout 6 years agoAuthor
Thanks

I appreciate your words Malc690 and thank you to those who have read and enjoyed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great story

Keep going with the story

bwmombwmomabout 6 years ago
Delightful

What a wonderful story of a wonderful family. Well done

KlitomaticKlitomaticabout 6 years ago
Oh My !

I never give 5's, well not very often. Gave this 5 on story 1 and 2 ,,, aaand on what the future holds.

cslt1cslt1almost 5 years ago
Delicious.

Loved It.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Awesome read thanks

Awesome absolutely loved it can see a third chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

One of the best I've ever read. Love that opera too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please, more. Will Scott help his sister and mother raise the kids?

GeorgeGaleGeorgeGaleabout 2 years ago

A great story, very well written and told..............():\

Loophole0Loophole0about 1 year ago

One of the best stories out there. Amazing. Wish we could have more when things got super interesting.

walkindatdogwalkindatdog11 months ago

it hadn't occurred tp me that there was no intercourse 'til i read the comment above, testament to the power of their story, your story. Usually i press for the fucking, but, like i said, it's absence wasn't missed. If there is a next part, i suppose the narrator will be Mom, not to be left out, directing traffic and enjoying the fruit of her loins, the warm embrace of her two loving children. Another delightful tale from your mighty pen.Thanks!

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