by sunburycd
This story needs a 3rd Chapter starting with the three of them making love and finishing with them coming home to their future.
Needed some fucking but I felt like I was in each room. I know the madam butterfly songs and imagined them playing. Beautiful sequel, dont delay with more.
Just getting to the hot sexy part where the 3 of them share a bed and some body fluids. Will bro & sis stay together as a couple? Maybe they all live together.
I love how this story is going and also hope there is at least another chapter coming.
loved it. great story line, very erotic. love the 3 characters and the dialogue. well done! looking forward to a lot of sex in chapters 3 AND 4 - yes - definitely needs AT LEAST 2 more chapters. Thanks for a great read.
I concur with all the others, more please. I found this chapter after commenting on the first. Thank you for continuing and please add on to this tale, it's progressing beautifully.
you're fast becoming on of the better writers on this site, please keep the stories coming
I appreciate your words Malc690 and thank you to those who have read and enjoyed.
I never give 5's, well not very often. Gave this 5 on story 1 and 2 ,,, aaand on what the future holds.
One of the best stories out there. Amazing. Wish we could have more when things got super interesting.
it hadn't occurred tp me that there was no intercourse 'til i read the comment above, testament to the power of their story, your story. Usually i press for the fucking, but, like i said, it's absence wasn't missed. If there is a next part, i suppose the narrator will be Mom, not to be left out, directing traffic and enjoying the fruit of her loins, the warm embrace of her two loving children. Another delightful tale from your mighty pen.Thanks!