by rbenne
no matter how careful you are, even if you fuck on a towel, somehow, some way, you're going to get SAND in your pussy. Now, this can be annoying depending on how deep it gets or it can downright PAINFUL but since you've demonstrated that you're INTO pain, I GUESS it's going to be ENJOYABLE(?) for you. So, ENJOY the (imagined) pain! KINKY!
This s*** is messed up. Not in a good way.
Believability is not only out to lunch with this one, it's taken the year off.
Write with the real world in mind...
I really enjoyed the series of stories. They were well written and well place my compliaments
It was a decent story but in need of editing, There are many scenes that make no sense i will reference one from this chapter since i'm commenting on it. You had George and Sam swimming and they decided to go inside to have sex, You described them getting out drying off then proceeding to take off their cloths...