All Comments on 'Stacey Gets Out of Her Rut'

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alcopopalcopopabout 8 years ago
Not the best.

Pretty crude, poor grammar and spelling. Get an editor... and try again. Maybe a bit more finesse to vulnerable characters.

WittonWittonabout 8 years ago
pretty bad

this was nothing but stroke employing all the cliches - not a story at all

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Very poor.

Really pretty disgusting. Just something for little boys to jack off to. Absolutely nothing that we (girls) can relate to. ZERO STARS Ugh

amarlanamarlanalmost 8 years ago
Get help from an editor

Engrossing but poor grammar.

SamWarrensSamWarrensabout 7 years ago
Well, don't listen to anyone who just signs as annonymous.

I thought the story was fine. I've seen much worse on this site. Unfortunately this site seems to attract too many slimy trolls. Don't listen to their idiotic rants. Keep writing. I'm looking forward to chapters 2 and 3.

Yes, get our heroine pregnant!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It's true, the first time it will hurt at first. Keep going and it will soon feel soooo good!

You'll remember your first time "forever.." Pick wisely, if you can.

Orpheum69

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Bad - no plot, no tension, completely unbelievable

I almost never rate a story as a “1” but this one surely qualifies

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