All Comments on 'Stacy's Mom Pt. 02'

1) Proof reading would remove some, or all, of the errors, including, perhaps, the confused use of their/they're. They mean totally different things, 'their' being possessive and 'they're' being a corruption of 'they are'!

2) Proof reading should also show you how very clumsy it is to call one participant "Stacy's mom" all the way through.

For the previous poster some proof reading of your comment would have shown you the correct word to describe they're is contraction not corruption.

For the author the other poster is correct while it does not hurt the story it is an annoyance and distracts from the flow while reading and enjoying the writing.

Mike

Loved it looking forward to more keep them Cummmmmmmmmingggggggg!!!!!!

Thanks for the feedback. I fixed the single instance of the incorrect usage of their/they're. Everyone needs an editor. Since contractions are a normal part of speech, I feel secure that I'm not actually corrupting the English language by using them. As far as referring to the title character repeatedly simply as "Stacy's Mom," I can see where it would be a little irritating, but it was done intentionally. Maybe it will make sense by the time you finish the story. Anyway, thanks again for reading and the feedback. I hate writing errors with a passion.

better stay in the deep end until their gone," she said

That's the one I found. Literotica just hasn't posted my updated edited version yet. Thanks again.

Oh I do like this , well written well paced and down right sexy.....

So, Wayne hadn't already had carnal knowledge of the mother. Wonder where he got his experience from, then?

The addition of Karen makes this more complicated, and perhaps realistic. Stacy's mom having a corrupting influence to push her along feels very real.

Wish she had a name though. :)

It follows the song word for word at some parts