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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
<3

i loooooved it. the beginning was a little sketchy but i loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Not bad for a first try!

It got me wet, and more than that, I've relived your fantasy on a few nights alone. Your girlfriend must be one lucky bitch!

DshannonDshannonabout 14 years ago
Well-written Piece

A very good story, with solid characterisation and dialogue, and a good build-up to the sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
NICE

Hey!

You write well...

The build up, the end everything is really good :)

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