All Comments on 'Stalking Amber Ch. 03'

CUMMON FRED MY SON ...HAVE THE BARSTARD

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HAHA thanks MJ, just setting myself up to avoid the pincer movement!

please dont let her capitulate lol and let fred rescue her xxx and please let her continue to insult him xxx words are a great way to deflate the ego if youdo it right lol hopefully xxx but im lovingthis story however it goes and your writing style for me is fab xxx

BBC and I are plotting as we speak.

ANOTHER AWESOME CHAPTER ! loving your storyline and so well written ! CANT WAIT FOR NEXT CHAPTER !!!

Too harsh maybe?? ;)

Fred! (and MfulJim) to the rescue. I'm kicking back with some homemade popcorn cuz the mans has got it covered :D

There's some serious ticket selling to be done here before you settle down in the ringside seat. Besides, I thought you were the girl who walks round the ring holding up the round number and if you ask nicely I'm sure you can have a go with the lemon juice. We can save the interesting bits for you..:-)

Woahhh... This is a great chapter! I like how amber doesn't give in easily except of aphrisidiac haha hope Fred can rescue her....

Am thinking. Will he say later that: there was no drug? Because I read before, the have same effect if you just say your drugged. I hope not, let she be faithful kind. I want to see till the ending....

Another amazing chapter! I love everything about this!! Its perfect!! Is Frank going to find out Brad has Amber? Can't wait :D!!!!!

Is there a point to be made here? One character that's maybe interesting. The rest acting without rhyme or reason. What's original or interesting about it? Nothing.

Unfortunately my writing can't please all :D

Thanks for the comments, even the negative ones make me smile, and thanks to those who have sent me positive support/feedback :)

Pleaseeeeeee more moreeee stories, I love all you stories, your plots are amazing!!!!!, moreeeeee, moreeeee please--- lots of love, annanicole19;)

Omg when is the next update coming??? I'm obsessed with this story, I really need a new chapter! You're very talented xoxo

love the story but if i read one more line about someones ice blue eyes i'm going to shoot myself in the face

I really enjoyed this story and I would love to learn more background info on the characters.

No update yet? I want more 😜

Sorry to those who are waiting,

I know it's taking ages, I'll get it out as soon as I can. Uni really has me by the balls right now :'(

Love your writing, just read The Ranch as well. BIG complaint though, wish you would finish a story before starting a new one. It so frustrating. Have not read your other one, because I do not want to get into it and it not be complete.

Last anon,

I understand your complaint completely. I'm aware it's poor form to start a new story and leave another hanging - I expected this criticism a very long time ago! Truth is, I never intended for this one to become a series, but the comments pushed me forward.

Apologies and lesson learned! No more palate cleansers between writing. The other story is finished, though not to everyones satisfaction.

Thanks.

Please update soon.

It's been more than a month.

I miss Brad

x

I need Brad in my life! Please update soon.

Sorry for the long silence,

Just to let you know I will definitely be back to finish this, I'm just seriously tied up with study at the moment. Hang in there if you can.

Thanks for your feedback and patience.

Great story ummmm but when is Brad going to take her anally?!

Just stopping by to say i still check regularly for updates, and i'm eagerly waiting for more!!

Can't wait

This is a good story. Keep at it.

I honestly hope Amber gets out and has her happily after with Fred! Having love ripped away by outside forces is horrible!!! Also, I hope Brad developes at least an iota of emotional intelligence. Boy does he need it.

Your writing skills are simply AMAZING! Usually with a story like this you take sides...Brad, Amber and now Fred...I like them all. I simply can't stand the thought of any of them ending up hurt or unhappy! I was assuming Fred was a wimpy dick, but now that you've introduced him and he isn't...I'm so torn! I really can't wait to see where you are headed with this story! So So Good! Major Talent! Thanks so much for sharing that talent with us mere mortals :)

i love all your stories but this ones my favorite! i do hope you'll keep writing it!

One of my favourites!!!! Please Write More Chapters on this!!!

Would love to see more.

I really hope you write more. I love it!

I'm really enjoying this story and ditto everything everbody said. It's super!! xo

I'm really hoping to read what's next, please continue! Love your stories!

Wow! What an amazing story and just amazing the way you write! Freaking love it. I know it's been a year but oh so wish you continued this one!

Ok now you've got me. Hook, Line and Sinker 🎣