by vanalas
You did it again you are fucking me up with another amazing story. I'm crying in my bed right now
god. .that was awesome and really a heart touching story. . . . I'm already in tears.
wow. I'm in love with your stories. please update chapter 2 real soon. pretty please.
An all around really decent start. I'd recommend an editor tho. Some parts I had to read three or four times to catch the meaning or see the switches in topic. THanks for submitting this π Please continue so I can see what happens with poor Adrian
atfirst it was boring but wow vanalas u always suprise me and to tel u the truth i cant predict where it z goin
i want jake to pay,that todd,jane and that crap sister
oh wow where is it going???
I wish to completely win my heart like no 1"forever yours"
cant wait,we love you vanalas
Oh wow this is sensational I hope I will be reading more very soon. I usually don't read if there is only one chapter but this story had 8 pages in chapter 1 and that is why I read it and I was on the edge of my sofa. I just love Adrain and it breaks my heart to see him treated this way. I think I have cried almost as much as he have. I hope all those bitches get whats coming to them. I love Nicholas' grandmother.
You make me cry.... I really love your stories! Thumbs up for you πππ
So they were ALL getting dressed as they came into the dining room? Not dressed ALREADY? Sorry, couldn't get past the 23 year old putting on her dress as she came in.