by vanalas
AM SORRY BUT I CANT CONCERTRATE NOW I,LL SEND IT LATER AM JUST TOO BOTHERED BY THE STORY
I hate cliffhangers!!! I love this story ... it has all of the twists and turns of a whodunit at its best !!!
I was hoping the bitch would tell Adrian why they all hated him like they do. Why does his uncles family hate him? How are they connected to Victoria??? What dark secret are they hiding? I think Nicholas should have just let Jake fall and bang his head. How could a mother treat her son like she is? She has no love for him, as long he does what she wants otherwise she has nothing short of a lothing and a yearning for Jake.
Can't wait for the next chapter... thanks Vanalas
do you know how that hurts??
Adrian is me and nick is you so when you do it lyk that,i find it hard
i hate that mum in law and that blar blar blar-jake
i hate them and i hate nick for not trusting Adrian
i just wish he become rich and shit them lyk bullshit
i hate the whole of nick's family granny excluded...this is it
now there turn is over so plz make them pay
and all in all i
want Adrian to be strict on nick...Yes let them reconcile but nick should have it
i dont care if its lyk F.Y but do it
and dont make jake and nick fall in love
iam still lost but all i beg send the next chapter today please all else i'l die
yah like kelvinvictor,ure the best bubu
but still F.Y is the leader prove me that Adrian can be braver than Ramon
if you do it then this will lead
and another question you have to answer is:of the couples,which one is the most handsome
1.D.L
2.F.Y
3.S.F.L?
Please we need answers in the next chapter
we love you and oh
I LOVE YOU
you mentioned that victoria husband is late and that she was once very poor and pregnant before been introduced to Granny whom accepted her.
my thought is that she murdered her husband to gain his wealth.
Only a criminal can do what she did.
and I also think that nemesis is catching up with her and that the person at the door is her dirty past Secret.
what if nick and jake get married?That hurts
even just seeing that damn jake enjoying what is not his makes me wana grab him and boil him in hot oil.shit
anddddd...I really hope its time for victoria to pay for her baddeeds
i hate the whole family except granny
yah i hate nick too,he so childish for not trusting his Adrian
no wonder moma's boy...I hope now its our time for revenge and i trust when it comes to this
i know u're bringing hotness,,i cant wait
and who's at the door??
i love you
since we are all vanalas's fans:why dont we demand for aroyal gaylove story??
Vanalas is the best so lets demand for aprince and afierce guy who is not picked on easily.......
how do you see that?
I love a royal lov story ... The prince and the pauper was where dopelgangers switched places and the pauper became Henry VIII son and the prince ended up running for his life on the street.
Why not twist it so the the prince meets his man when he escapes for an adventure on to the streets and they fall in love only to be found and dragged back tot he palace ... months later when they are holding a grand ball he's faced with his love being ridiculed when the boy is publically accused by his family of not being who he really is and that he is a servant and not the true owner of their castle ...
You know the cinderella story the Duke marries and dies, lleaving a bitter bitch of a wife and her ugly sisters who turn his daugter into a slave - only she marries the prince ... Well it would be similar escept the ugly sisters would be warring, evil, effeminate son ... sort of Cinderfella meets modern day twists.
cant wait for chapter 8..This story is my first to read and its interesting
i hope to read more of this writer's stories
by ramoramo