All Comments on 'Stand for Love Ch. 10'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Decoy

It would be great if adrian left a decoy CD in his room. Just to give them that last sliver of hope only to brutally crush it. I don't think Adrian will give them the chance to find the CD.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
decoy

I agree with that first comment. Maybe he can even spice it up by playing the video on the large screen projector at the party. I can't wait to see the look on Victoria and Jake faces when they see the video been played publicly because they thought they had the last copy and they had misbehaved.

Just imaginating.

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago
hahahahaha "no one wants to taste the gabbage u cook"hahahaha

all moments were great...Oh how did u see the elevator scene??? it wa mwaaaa to me

hahahahahahahahaha victoria and her frnds..Oh that poor mother,what aplot!

hmmmmm yeah,let adrian put afake cd and they think its real,

yeah,let adrian put some related info,lyk vic toking to jake

they can even slap him knowing they have evidence,then out of the blue...............BOOOMB

HAHAHA,,,actually let nick be more romantic

let our plans not fail

let read it again

kelvinvictorkelvinvictorover 6 years ago

Loving every moment of this story!!!

I want Victoria to really fall off her perch and realize that there is more to life than being rich and famous. I want her to realize just how people around her, her supposed friends really feel about her.

I still think that Jake and his family need their cumuppance. Why are they like they are to Adrian? Is his father the oldest son and should have inherited what his brother has. if the truth comes out will the family be ruined and Adrian get it all? Just why were they like that to their own flesh and blood?

Please post next chapter quickly as I go into a pining remission when I don't have your story to read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Addictive

It's difficult to like a story where there are no sympathetic characters. Sure Adrian has had much to feel bitter about but the way he is treating Jake and Victoria is totally unacceptable. They may be deeply unpleasant but he is probably driving them to suicide. Then Nicholas is a weakling only interested in the pleasure of sex. If he is married to Adrian then they should have been able to talk. The peripharel characters are not really interesting. Only George is in any way likeable in that he does seem to genuinely care for Nicholas and even he has had his moments.

Maybe in a perfect world Nicholas would kick out Adrian and settle down with George. The sex might not be so good but at least he would be with someone with whom he would have a genuine relationship.

It would be nice for you to try and write a story with believable characters and genuine emotions. But it's fair to say that this story is addictive even if it is not likeable.

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago
I definately dont agree with the previous comment

u know,its all about creativity and the plan,anyway even in real life people are framed

and if u dont get it,nick is mad at adrian do u want him to shower love after that all trouble even with evidence??? c'mon

guys what do u think Adrian's planning with george???

Nick needs some hurting by adrian since he said he dont wana tok to him

Adrian can even walk naked from his room just to make the guy,,yearn u know.

Damn i dont wana wait for so long for another chapter

and for the culprits,let them get it.SHAME

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago
i think its time for good times

van,

as i reread thru my Adrianick i have realised that the culprits have got enough

plz make the truth out becoz it will be there last punch..Oh dont forget our suggestions on how u may do it

bring back our old Adrianick love...And make them yearn for eachother but nick yearning more PLEASE let adrian not suffer more

still forever yos on top,,anndddd actually

i'l base on the reconciliation to determine the leader

I love u,plz post soon

kelvinvictorkelvinvictorover 6 years ago

I think that anyone who has been :

1 Hurt by his own relatives and used as a slave

2 Beatten to near death and locked in a cupboard to die

3 Repeatedly abused by action and deeds of V and J

4 Blamed and abused by family - truth looked for

5 Even own husband has never beleieved him

then that person deserves and is allowed to have a little revenge and to have the truth shown to those who have pointed the finger at him ... The CD needs to be played at the party and the police need to be there... Jake needs to try to save his own skin by implicating his own family and revealing the truth behind who Adrian really is.

Please do not keep us waiting...

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