All Comments on 'Stand for Love Ch. 15'

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kelvinvictorkelvinvictorover 6 years ago

How can you do that to us ! ! ! A whole day of pining for Adrian's safety. Who was it that asked for the evil family to come back ... Well guess what Victoria is back with a vengence ...

What is it that they each have had with the company. Todd is one of the son's, but maybe not from Adrian's grandfather which is why Jake would never be a DNA match. Why else would they have waited?

The Lawyer is a plant as Victoria said, "Let's have them meet ... Thus getting him into a car and allowing thugs to hijack the car he was in. Also I now wonder about the meeting Nic is in or has something happened to him and hence the phone being switched off.... Why when things seem wrong to Adrian doesn't he accept that they are.

Mind you I did like the vision of George's ass bobbing up and down as he fucked John... Liked that a lot!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

I knew it that Todd was adopted. Adrian is kidnapped alive because of his DNA in other to make Jake inherit the company.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

I think Adrian have a tracking device planted on him in other to find out if he is telling the truth and that it might be able to track him down in other to find out his location after been reported missing. maybe Jake and family with Victoria would confess to Adrian why they hate his family and killing them before attempting to kill Adrian not knowing that the device is recording their conversations. and they were arrested at last before they could kill Adrian

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

oh my my. Nicholas hatch was right. I love George and John been together. Glad to see the story coming to an end in the next last two or maybe three chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
You don't need a living body

Adrian does not need to be alive to get a DNA sample. The twisted fucks probably just want to see him suffer before they finish him off.

NADA0713NADA0713over 6 years ago
Not again.

So they killed Adrian and Nicolas 's fathers ,cause they wanted the company this people are evil pure evil ,and why should Adrian suffer again its time he becomes the hero ,and exposes all of them , for once I want all of them in jail ,they tried once not again ,and can Nicolas be the hero this time rescue his husband, and redeem himself, nice one again can't wait.

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago
WHAT????????

OH MY GOD VANALAS,

my Adrian...Please let them not do that to my Adrian..NO NOHOOOOOO

At 1st i thought it was my Nick but now....Its my little A..Adrian!!!!! OHH he tried to fight but the jerks had him

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago

Do u know what hurts me???,the culprits tend to hurt us more

bye the time they are punished,they would be far..DAMNN THEM

i knew it,they had been silent for 3 chapters,sth was fishy

OOHH VANALAS,I WANA CRY,why ar u doing this to us van???

truly all the pages were good,but P.8,gosh

plz spare us dear

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago

Our chapter was so excellent,its where love making was haha-rough i'l loved it

our George got Lovely Johnny here,Btw their scene hahahahahahaha was mwaaah

but my Adrian,see,he was the victim

oh Nick,how is he gona behave...After knowing that Adrian's missing???Poor bubu

am just too sad

iam not even finding the words to use

josranvictorjosranvictorover 6 years ago

May be the theme song is Breathe Again-toni braxton

oh plz astonishing vanalas post soon

damn,why is victoria so involving???Gosh the woman is not only amoron but also AMURDER???,atleast for todd's family i can know,they were outsiders not real blood of wilson

damn school keep me away from my wonderful vanalatic stories-QUALITY AT ITS BEST

OHHH my Adrian

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