All Comments on 'Star-Crossed Fate'

Great story, needs to be continued.

More, please

Can't wait to find out what happens with these two!

For once, not only did I completely enjoy the content - the writing was excellent. Usually everything on here relies on being sex driven, but I absolutely appreciate that you used words to tell the story and not someone's vagina.

Very very good job and it incredibly sexy.

Hope to see more from you soon!

Hm. Instead of continuing, I sugest you go back, and explain the history between these two. I always find that if you know more about the characters it's more intense for the reader when it gets to the sex. Just my thoughts, but I enjoyed this.

great start please continue

concise but love it!

Oh my God...reading the heat and lust between these two was unbelievable. Had to be based on some truth. Only thing was, it ended way to soon. I was looking forward to reading an all night marathon of love.

It's shocking how much can be packed into such a short story. These characters were so well developed, the love story palpable and the sex was HOT... What's not to love? Thank you for sharing!

OMG this story is white lightening hot!! Fate brought them back together for a passionate night but I'm anxious to find out what happens with the two living on different coasts (LA & NY). Ok grezzigirl you got us hook, now please continue to reel us in with part 2, thanks

It was a good story.

They still seem pretty Star-crossed to me though. Both having successful careers on different sides of the country, and one were she maybe be asked to travel a lot.