All Comments on 'Star Of The Family'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
why so short

couldn't get going good.give us more to chew on in the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
too short

your stroy is too short

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
So short story

Why so short story and what happen after that????? So better make happy ending?????

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
OH, you need to continue this story

Oh, you need to continue this story. It's VERY VERY HOT!

truth12911truth12911almost 10 years ago

good start, looking forward to the next chapter

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