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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Page 2 Nothing annoyance.

Great story. Terrific story.

Only a minor peeve. Clicking on the second page only to find a few lines of text (just one here, and not even more story) is rather disappointing, -meh- and just a little bit annoying.

Try to avoid that as much as possible. Either trim the story or, better yet, write much more.

No. Just write much more.

HandcuffGirlHandcuffGirlover 12 years agoAuthor
I tried! :)

I tried to hit one page, (3,583 words) but with my authoress's notes I just went over, without knowing it. Sorry. Most people say that Imperial Prostitute goes on too long. ;)

I'm working on another sequel. I hope to start posting it soon.

Bethany

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Second time round

Hey

Just wanted to let you know this is my second time through your stories. Absolutely loving them again. :)

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