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Great. I like the new twist. And the part where maybe the Jedi get control back. Maybe they could make the imperials their bitches.

You finally have the Jedi not looking like a bunch of chumps.

To the anonymous person that promptly leaves me a comment titled "One Star" every time I post a new chapter. . .

Don't you have something better to do than read new chapters of a story that you don't like? Literotica posts over a hundred stories a day. Read some of them instead of harassing me.

And if you've read the Fate of the Jedi series, the Jedi look like a bunch of 'chumps' for the first five books of it.

But to be honest, this particular story line was depressing me. Quite frankly, you may have made a mistake in choosing the Star Wars theme as your story backdrop. The universe of the Star Wars saga has been firmly established not only by G. Lucas, and the authorized writers of the different spin off novels, But by the countless fans who write their own stories and publish their own fanzines. At its' core, Star Wars is the American Western set in space. Do you know of the Hat Formula? In a western movie, the good guy wears the white hat, the bad guy wears the black hat, and the guy in the gray hat turns good if he started off as bad, and bad if he started off as good. Deep down, we all want the good guy to win. And remember, even Darth Vader got a chance at redemption when he killed the Emperor instead of his son Luke. The anguish that Jaina suffered after killing her brother makes for an interesting study in the struggle that is raging within her mind. To be torn between being a Jedi with knowledge of her actions, or to have the peace of being a mindless servant responsible only for what she is told to do. Like I said, you are a great writer, but the ease with which you have the Empire rolling over all their opponents is becoming monotonously depressing. I do really enjoy your work.

P.S. I am not anonymous. My name is Matt Walker.

In Fate of the Jedi, (the first 5 books) and the end of Legacy of the Force, Daala is continually treated like a good guy even though she has a proven track record of evil. All the 'good guys' know that she is evil, and still wants to destroy the Jedi, but they all go along with her being GA Chief of State. Han and Leia are even willing to try to work things out between her and the Jedi Order after she sends Mando's to attack the Jedi Temple (and their daughter) The Jedi in my story are doing a lot more than the first 5 books of FOTJ. If you enjoy my work, why do you keep giving me one star? You don't have to vote at all. You even declared that you gave me one star while giving me a positive comment.

As for the idea of the good guys winning, read the Legacy comics. The Empire(led by Jag Fel's grandson) destroys the Galactic Alliance, then a Sith takes over the galaxy. Everything they are writing about now is a waste of time. No character matters to the authors/editors besides Luke and Ben Skywalker anymore. That's why those are pretty much the only two doing anything in the books other than sitting on their asses. Jaina will probably end up married to Jag, and go to the Empire, and become a Lando-type character, only making occasional appearances.

I gave you my name because I am not the jerk, "One Star". If I did not like your work, I simply wouldn't comment or vote on it. My personal philosophy is that if I disagree with you, I would never hide behind the anonymity of a faceless comment posting. One should have the courage to stand behind ones' comments. I really do enjoy your work, and I hope to read more. A hint as to my personal kink is your story "Transporting Leslie Addams".

Matt Walker