All Comments on 'Star Wars: Return to Trigalis Ch. 04'

Amazing can't wait for the next chapter.

Will you bring the zoloz back in?

or is it going to be straight admiral dalla?

I vote back to Admiral Daala! Time for Ta'tan'ia to be back with her one true Mistress....with Stormie helping to keep her in line (and loving every minute of it) too. Perhaps Daala could already have Tenel Ka under control again too...and the two submissives could have some fun together.

As for the plot, what about introducing some (former) Imperial Royal Guards? What are they up to in this timeline..?

Dude, I appreciate a good build-up and backstory, but your stuff's pretty light on the actual sex. Lesbian bondage sex is so damn hot; please please please put more in.

I'm certainly glad you're back writing again. And it is nice to read an actual story with a plot that has just enough sex scenes to spice things up and keep it interesting. Although I certainly hope that the keystone cop traits that the Jedi in your stories seem to have won't be too obvious in this story.

Neosteeled