All Comments on 'Staring at the Sun Ch. 01'

The "perfesser" awards an A, with fig leaf cluster.

The characters are very believable--I certainly can identify with them! It's a great start and I'm looking forward to a lot more of this series. Thanks!

It's a bit premature for a meaningful opinion, but it became evident early that you can write. I'm looking forward to a very nice story.

Seems alarming true to life! Which way will the characters develope? Can I wait to see?! Guess I must...

L.

Well Janie, it looks like the start of another fine story, however your heroine's apprehensions regarding Jake and the coincidence etc. also has me worried and has my imagination working overtime. I hope that things turn out OK for her marriage only time, and further chapters from you, will tell! Looking forward to more of your excellent writing. Pete.

Janie, great job on chapter one. I can already see great potential in all the characters. Even at such an early stage they seem well rounded and thought out. I can't wait to see more.

This is very promising. Can't wait to read chapter 2!

Can't believe that I've only now come upon this story.

It's beautifully and realistically written. Believable, with full-bodied characters. Anyone in a long-term relationship or marriage, with the inevitable rough patches, will recognise the feelings, frustrations; innocent remarks that carry so much baggage.

I'm hooked and can only hope that all works out well for them (and for all of us in similar situations).