All Comments on 'Starlight Gleaming Ch. 09'

the best stories on here and one of the best I have ever read - thanks!

Thank you, gyrfurune for your assistance as a reader. The mistakes that slipped through were totally my fault.

The tag line is also in error. I wrote it while chapter 9 and 10 were one entity, but at 75 pages, I decided to split it; sabotage and attacks happen in Chapter 10; fortunately, Ten is nearly ready to go to my reader for a scan of the more obvious mistakes (again, thank you, gyrfurune!). Already approaching 70 pages again. Ah, well.

Specific feedback is welcome. Thank you for reading!

you keep turning up the heat!

onward and upward . . . . . . . . .

Slowly, the dining area filled up with patrons, but they were quiet, subdued, and avoided going near the armored soldier.

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The meal was good, and we were thinking about dessert when the corporal touched his helmet. Ixma jumped at his sudden movement.

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Why didn't any of Janetta's team ask Ranji why there is an armoured suit next to him?