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We had a lot to talk about, but first a shower.
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 10 years agoHopefully, this author's other offerings are better than this pile of shit.
Anonymousover 10 years agoThe only thing I would change is to end it with hubby wanting to fuck her right then and there but her, being the practical one, hustling them out of there before the guy could realize the theft, promising to take care of him while they speed away.
I love your writing. I don't have anything on this site, but have a story or two at eroticstories.com under the name Jasper.
49gregabout 11 years agoI really liked it and thought it was a sexy, erotic story. I liked that he took the money, although I wouldn't have taken that much, I guess I worry about the guy looking for them, possibly with friends LOL. - I tend to identify with a story way much.
Anonymousover 11 years agoI give the story a four. I came close to giving it three. I cannot stand a thief. The theft really detracted for your work. Your story would have worked just as well by her giving it away for free or charging for it.
