by WillieMac
Come on WillieMac, a kilometer is 0.68 miles! Just how long are her legs. The second paragraph ended it for me.
I liked it. It was different. I wasn't at all confused and the kilometer thing, well, sorry the poor fellow took it literally.
MichaelG
great story so far love to see the rest of the vacation soon. sounds exciting
I enjoyed it, but was at no point aroused by it. This was trying too hard to be naturally sensual (much like present day J-Lo ). Kudos, if the author designed the narrative that way on purpose. So Montenegro is actually nice in August ?