All Comments on 'Start without Me'

I noted that this was your first story submission here. If you are new to writing erotica, you seem to have a great future ahead - this was very good. I do hope there will be more to follow!

Thank you, welcome to Literotica on behalf of us all and please bring us more of your talent - five stars.

Good writing and fun to read. I found the action a little mechanical, and as a reader this made me feel more like an outside observer than plugged in to the young lady's head. More showing than telling of her emotion would have kicked this to the next level. By all means continue writing.

Great story line and good action. Starts out a bit slow but ends with a bang. A few

tweaks here and there as visioneer suggested would add even more depth. All in all

entertaining and a good read. I like this author. Hope we see more from you.

Congratulations.

Short & hot, just how I like them.

A great story.

What I liked most was the happy ending. No extended time of waiting, in a cruel hogtie.

Unfortunately the author did only provide this only story. I would have liked to read more.